Breaking Love – A Poem

A magnificent river

Full of life


A landslide


The great boulder rolled

To the centre

Furies waters

Ever after


The cradle

Now a thrash




May erode in time


Before the waters



Will the river run dry


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  1. There is a song with the line when the river runs dry by an Australian band – this reminded of that. It’s concise this one 🙂 ..what sort of mood are we in today Mr.P is your world crashing down like the landslide?

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