Tips for the budding Blogger – part 4.3 – Why Spiderman gets everything wrong

First a quick Birthday message for myspokenheart.

Heart demanding gin
I hope you have a splendid day 🙂

And we’re off…

Tip 10. Don’t do a hollywood ending.

Kill the main character. Don’t do the “they’re dead, they’re dead, oh, no, wait, their coughing, oh crap, they’re going to make it.” That is so bloody annoying. Just kill the little shit.

Having been forced through the torture of The Amazing Spiderman (aka TAS, possibly the worst “reboot” of a franchise in history) – I saw every awfulness imaginable in this Hollywood massacre.

[This movie is shit]
[There… spoiled it]

Spiderman’s dead uncle is forgotten in moments, his powers come almost immediately (he ‘learns’ his powers by skateboarding! Awfulness everywhere!), there is no ‘battle with himself’, anywhere… ever. He’s a twat.

I can’t remember many character names, perhaps due to the trauma of watching TAS, and no way in hell am I exposing myself to any more of it, so you’ll have to interpolate.

The last five minutes of TAS are a tearing car-crash of everything that can go wrong with hollywood. In the  Toby Maguire Spiderman, we see him struggle with his love for the girl over almost the entire three movies. He is bumbling, he misses dates, he comes to realise he can’t be with her because she would be endangered. He is hopeless as Peter, heroic yet tortured as Spiderman. At the end of Movie One he walks from the cemetery knowing he will be alone with his responsibility. You can feel his torment. It was actually really good.

Peter Parker sticks to a wall
The Spiderman reboot may have missed the point a little… a lot… entirely.

At the end of the soulless and unnecessary ‘remake’, having got the girl within eight seconds of the opening credits and revealed his identity within 12, Spiderman has to promise her dying father he will give up his ‘true love’, so she isn’t endangered. This is near the end (no, not the climax, relief maybe, but not climax – unless you enjoy hating yourself and crying while you orgasm).

Spiderman promises. Good boy.

She is heart-broken to lose him and some of the first and only moments of emotional connection enter the film. Despite all the crap that has gone before we care a little – such is the power of forbidden love. Then she calls on him after her father’s funeral and says “I needed you, how could you abandon me.” Spiderman cannot tell her, the pathos grows. She turns and leaves, but stops and turns back. “He made you promise, didn’t he?” she says, at which point I’m yelling at the screen, no, NO, NO – don’t say it, don’t burst the one precious emotion this puss-fest of a movie has managed. She goes on, “My father, made you promise so I wouldn’t be in danger.” Oh WTF WTF WTF WTF!!! REALLY?! You needed to totally spell it out?! I thought the 12 certificate on the cover was the minimum age! Damn.

Now she knows and so the power of his gesture is empty, because the only nobility came from her not knowing the nature of his sacrifice.


Cue final scene. Parker enters classroom, sits behind ‘forbidden love’. Teacher tells Peter Parker he is late. Parker promises not to be late again. “Don’t make promises you can’t keep” says teacher. “But those are the best kind,” Peter whispers to his forbidden love, who smiles – knowing she gonna get some after all.

Spiderman’s promise to the dying father will be broken – and she smiles!

Spidey & Love have problems and solve them
It’s the depth of character that grips you like Spidey’s hand to a wall


By now I am writhing on the floor smearing myself in my own faeces such is my pain. So she is okay with loving a guy who A) breaks promises to dying men, B) thinks generally that the best thing about promises is breaking them, and C) would rather get laid than keep his loved one safe? And we’re supposed to want to watch this hypocritical and libidinous arsehole in another movie?!

Horse shit. I would rather spend a year smeared in my own excrement than see such awfulness again.

Kill the hero. Kill him now and damn it, leave him dead. Destroy the marriage and let it stay bent and bleeding on the kitchen floor. Let the lover leave and LOCK THE F*KING DOOR!

You are a writer. You are to write of the human condition. Perhaps you have fallen in love with your characters and want them all to live happily ever after, writhing naked and ecstatic in a giant bowl of jelly. I don’t f*ing care. Kill them, or at least hurt the bastards – leave them broken and miserable.

Wrapping your story in a bow is as good as putting it in a coffin.
(Man, if this isn’t turned into a famous quote I’ve been robbed.)

I hate stories that just stop. “But what next,” I cry, “but how will she, what will he, where will they…?” Hate them. But these are also the stories that haunt me for weeks afterwards, because I can write a thousand possible endings, because yearning stays with you. Be honest, you remember a stab in the eye longer than a chocolate fudge-sundae, right!

Angry book
and don’t tell me you won’t love it!

Leave them wanting more…

A neat book is a dead book. Kill them, hurt them, leave them half way through a sentence. Pierce your reader, break their bloody hearts, because that is life and that is what we want.

More important than any of my other tips though, is

33 thoughts on “Tips for the budding Blogger – part 4.3 – Why Spiderman gets everything wrong

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  1. Ok…will be back to comment here (esp as I was scrolling to the comment box and I saw some math thing…I HAVE to come back and look at that lol.)

    But …. saw you on myspokenheart’s … which means…. you are now INFECTED with the BLOG PARTY!!!

    *dance dance dance*
    *cha cha cha…and balances a cupcake on my head*

    grins … yah.

  2. First off thanx for the lovely birthday message and the uuummmm heartfelt picture? 😉
    secondly if you can take The Amazing Spiderman movie as a complete piece of brain fluff that is absolutely cheezie, predictable and just like the old cartoons from the 70’s then you could actually maybe enjoy it… (I did – but I had to turn my brain off first)… even though all the characters are pretty much the same (MJ won’t be introduced for awhile is what I have been told) there is apparently a difference between Spiderman and The Amazing Spiderman – don’t ask me I am not a comic book buff… well there’s my two cents worth… 😛

    1. Careful now – such is the awfulness of this movie that you are skating on thin ice! I was whacked out on crack, 16 tins of cider to the wind and cranking meths when I watched it, and it still wasn’t enough to dull the horror!!

  3. I had no intentions or desire to see this movie, but you have become the unwitting perpetrator of getting it stuck into my brain that now I have to see it.

    Thanks. Thanks a lot.

    Just kidding … still don’t want to see it.

    1. What did you see? Are you one of those doctors? I’m not going with you, not after last time… what did you see… don’t take me to that room… WHAT DID YOU SEEEE!!!???

      1. Just the fact you made a whole post about Spiderman, yet it just couldn’t be a simply titled “Why Spiderman gets everything wrong” you had to deem it more purposeful than that by adding the blogging tip preface. Giving you the excuse to write about it. Mmhm, I’m on to you.

      2. You so are! My next ‘blog tips’ includes the tip to reuse popular titles to whore extra hits. I’m evil yes, but I wear it on my cheap, soiled sleeve 🙂

  4. For that last comment you gave me here, I see what you did there, too! Confuddle me as you wish, but it won’t work.

  5. I so love your hilarity. I chortle and chuckle all the way through a post. I so agree characters must be folded, bent and mutilated otherwise it is just the sugar rush of ice cream consumed late at night.

    So appreciate visits to The Word Zoo and attentive close reading.

    I must go on to read another tip for a budding blogger.

      1. Go meds. I deliberately got hooked on meds just so I could go cold monkey (Panda’s don’t do cold turkey – or any turkey) and write my posts in the delirious state of wracked anxiety and self-loathing that proper withdrawal offers as a gift to us!

  6. Oh, man, I am glad I read this post. I thought it was stupid to reboot Spiderman when it had only recently been booted by Toby – who I agree did a fantastic job. That makes me sick, destroying a character like that. It’s like how a lot of people love those insipid Twilight movies when the characters are total twats. If there is no real sacrifice, there is no drama. The characters have to lose something, give up something, in order to gain reverence. The author just can’t say “hey, like this guy. He sparkles, swings from a string, is played by this actor.” The reader or viewer learns this through his actions. And he can’t get everything he wants on a silver platter with no conflict. And he can’t be a freaking twat that acts like an ass and gets rewarded for it. So not seeing this movie now. Sitting through Twilight was bad enough (and I only did that to skewer it later.)

    1. Watched Twiglet I and some of Twiglet II, fell into a stimulus-starvation coma half-way into T II, never went back!
      When will Hollywood get that we don’t just want spoon-fed, sugar coated turds on our screens!

  7. LOVE happy endings, hate main characters killed off, think Bambi is evidence Disney actually hated children, and was equally traumatized as a child when Teacher got to “that part” of Charlotte’s Web.

    My home is not overly-adorned with butterfly tchotchkes, adorable stuffed animals, or throw pillows; nor do I read so-called Romance novels. I adore Orson Scott Card–this one can take some emoting, y’all. But eff no happy endings. Too much of that in REAL life.

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